The first three pages was just two characters talking to each other. Also
The screenplay I created was not that good, because I struggled understanding the story and I think my main struggle that there was not much action.
The original screenplay was completely different, because there is much more detail and the writer describe the lighting, what's in the room, what are the wearing, the way they are sitting and what are they doing before and while talking.
You need a lot more detail about what I wanted you to learn from this task - as in how to bring stories to life. You have limited examples or explanations of how meaning was created in the original screenplay and in your own version. This is a brief summary of what you did rather than a detailed exploration of what you learned about planning and created meaning in media products.
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